I enjoyed watching your elevator pitch. The pace of your speech is just right, and your voice comes out clear and intelligible. You convey a lot of useful information and clearly explain what your service is about. You also persuade by stating the benefits and advantages of your service both for car drivers and passengers. My only recommendation would be to try to make your presentation more dynamic and add some movement. Great job, and best of luck with your service!
Alex, I think that you did a better job on this pitch. You looked more composed and slowed the pace of your conversation to allow the audience to better understand you. You were also able to simplify your product to make it very clear and concise for your target audience. Next time, I would try to use more enthusiasm in your voice and use some sort of pausing in your speech to make your pitch even more appealing.
Hi Alex, you have a great pitch. I think this app would be very useful. Overall your presentation was put together very well. Your speed in your speaking was perfect and you provided a good amount of detail about your product. I would recommend in your next pitch to move around a bit more and have your camera angled straight on. Overall, excellent job!
Alex,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed watching your elevator pitch. The pace of your speech is just right, and your voice comes out clear and intelligible. You convey a lot of useful information and clearly explain what your service is about. You also persuade by stating the benefits and advantages of your service both for car drivers and passengers. My only recommendation would be to try to make your presentation more dynamic and add some movement. Great job, and best of luck with your service!
Alex,
ReplyDeleteI think that you did a better job on this pitch. You looked more composed and slowed the pace of your conversation to allow the audience to better understand you. You were also able to simplify your product to make it very clear and concise for your target audience. Next time, I would try to use more enthusiasm in your voice and use some sort of pausing in your speech to make your pitch even more appealing.
Hi Alex, you have a great pitch. I think this app would be very useful. Overall your presentation was put together very well. Your speed in your speaking was perfect and you provided a good amount of detail about your product. I would recommend in your next pitch to move around a bit more and have your camera angled straight on. Overall, excellent job!
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