The feedback that I received from my last elevator pitch was very resourceful and helpful in that I am able to gain criticism and feedback from kids my age who are in the same position as me. Obviously there are always things that you need to work on to make sure your pitch is perfect but getting these lessons now are crucial. My posture was a good feedback that I received as well as my direct tone of voice. I'd say all of my feedback was insightful and helpful.
I am definitely more comfortable in front of the camera versus the beginning of this semester for our first elevator pitch. I need to work on the memorization portion of the elevator pitch are there are some details from time to time that I still leave out by accident that could better the pitch overall. I believe the pitch is better completely compared to the first elevator pitch I did for this class. Overall, all these attempts and pitches help grow your brand and make you better at speaking.
Alex,
ReplyDeleteGood job with your pitch, is good to see how each iteration builds up on the feedback from the previous one and adds new elements. Of course, there is always room for improvement, but that is in the essence of entrepreneurship. I agree you are more relaxed and easy-going in front of the camera and that results into a smoother delivery and a more compelling argument. I have been watching other pitches as well and seems to be the norm. I think you have a good elevator pitch and you could use it to sell your product. Great job!
Hey Alex,
ReplyDeleteI think you did an even better job on this video than the last one. You seemed even more confident and knowledgable when presenting this time, and you had a very solid grasp of the material. Rather than rushing through it, you were able to slow down and pace yourself, displaying enthusiasm and an unparalleled confidence. Well done.
Alex,
ReplyDeleteYour elevator pitch has progressed a lot over the three different takes. Similarly, I found that one of the major problems for me was getting comfortable talking to the camera and once I got comfortable with that the rest of the pitch just seemed more natural. It gets hard to critique to small things that we do, so the feedback from our classmates is very beneficial in perfecting our pitches. It seems like you've taken the feedback given to you and used it constructively to produce a clear and direct pitch of your service. Nice job, Alex.
Alex,
ReplyDeleteI thought your elevator pitch was very good. It looks like you are extremely comfortable and that you have made this pitch multiple times before. I think that you have used the feed that you received and used it to make this pitch even better.